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Hi!
I am Devin Niall, which, by the way, is my pen name. I like to keep some privacy, though I'm sure if you keep on digging, you'll find out my real name anyway.
I'm 19 years old, and I live in the Netherlands.
I most often write poetry, but since a month ago I also have a blog (sort of), called 'Honesty', in which I share my thoughts on my daily life, or on things in general/life.
I love Doctor Who, I listen to metal, folk, but I'll listen to anything as long as it sounds good. I have a beginning interest in whisk(e)y and 'special' beers, and am currently enjoying Bushmills and Highland Park, which, in my opinion, are the best I've had so far.
I try not to judge other people, since I hate being judged myself. I try not to favour one side during arguments, since I don't want to offend people or antagonise anyone.
I am a student of English, and as you can probably see from my spelling, it is British English which I study, and not American English, though certain American elements are foregrounded in the studies.
I am a contributor to our studies association magazine, and I hope to be more active for the organisation in the upcoming year, if people will allow me to. Unfortunately, I spend much of my time on my studies, and on reading books, alongside writing, which means I may not be able to be here all the time.
I don't really have much else to say. I thank you for reading through this boring introduction. Introductions really aren't my cup of tea. I'd prefer to let people get to know me as we communicate, instead through what I call a pinpointed personality given through introductions.
I am Devin Niall, which, by the way, is my pen name. I like to keep some privacy, though I'm sure if you keep on digging, you'll find out my real name anyway.
I'm 19 years old, and I live in the Netherlands.
I most often write poetry, but since a month ago I also have a blog (sort of), called 'Honesty', in which I share my thoughts on my daily life, or on things in general/life.
I love Doctor Who, I listen to metal, folk, but I'll listen to anything as long as it sounds good. I have a beginning interest in whisk(e)y and 'special' beers, and am currently enjoying Bushmills and Highland Park, which, in my opinion, are the best I've had so far.
I try not to judge other people, since I hate being judged myself. I try not to favour one side during arguments, since I don't want to offend people or antagonise anyone.
I am a student of English, and as you can probably see from my spelling, it is British English which I study, and not American English, though certain American elements are foregrounded in the studies.
I am a contributor to our studies association magazine, and I hope to be more active for the organisation in the upcoming year, if people will allow me to. Unfortunately, I spend much of my time on my studies, and on reading books, alongside writing, which means I may not be able to be here all the time.
I don't really have much else to say. I thank you for reading through this boring introduction. Introductions really aren't my cup of tea. I'd prefer to let people get to know me as we communicate, instead through what I call a pinpointed personality given through introductions.
Literature
you'll never go away
I feel betrayed.
I feel put down.
And I feel burnt out.
I harbor many doubts.
About you, and about myself
Only here would I dare let them out.
I hate you !
Or at least... I want to.
After you abandoned me for a seeded life,
When I was still only a sprout.
...But that is not why I am angry.
I loved you.
Every screaming inch
Every bellowing note you sprang
I stood by in your favor
And then
I didnt
I hate you!
Or at least I should
When you beckoned me t
Literature
Onslaught
it rushes over me
a gust of tumbling objects
protestations and pinheads
straining the rainbow stitches
that pin my soul together
a stabbing suggestion
complete with kiwi and tangerine
and words i dont quite understand
hurtle towards me
uncertainty bleaches the threads
binding me together
thoughts overwhelm
red coals and sweatpants
bits of cloth and ruby dust
are sprinkled across my mindscape
a crack appears
a spark
ignites bits of fluff
camo teddies and orange bubbles
a gaping hole
a devouring empty mouth
it occurs to me that i have lost
everything
the black whirlwind that
speeds across the landscape
shreds everything
but from the pu
Literature
Leave
1. crows gathered for the last goodbyes
Leave you at your last residence
Forgotten grave, erased
From their memory after today
Dont touch me
Just dont, not a single word
Let me, be... covered in my sadness
Under my sunglasses, sun is gone
CHORUS
I dont need your sympathy
Just leave, I just wanna stay
Look at your grave in my own peace
Allow my tears finally flow
Scream and cursed be
Whoever took you
Watchin my pieces laying on the floor
I feel I failed you
Even now, I dont know what to say
Just sit there, I cant believe your gone
Still I know your next to me, starin at me
2. don
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A fine way to introduce yourself to us all, it's odd for me to critique this because what I'm judging isn't really how you have presented yourself but what yourself who is being presented.
I can say from what I can read here you are an interesting person, obviously in possession of a sense of humour owing to that challenge for us to go rooting through your bins.
I myself am a fan of doctor who and I like a bit of metal myself and I applaud your judgement and share a disdain/ fear of being judged myself.
So I shall simply finish this by saying welcome to the club my friend.