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Tranquillity set in her eyes
As if all her prayers had been heard
And she said, "His answers never are deferred.
They will come whenever he wishes you to apprise."

"He is there to hear your passionate cries,
But he will not always grant that which you preferred.
His presence is in every singing bird,
In every verse, the truth He must chastise."

And when men learned of these words,
Spoken so loudly, every bias surpassing,
They clung unto Her, a Goddess arisen.

She wandered the forests, listening to Her birds,
Every tiny song she was amassing
When done, She ascended, and left mankind forgiven.
A sonnet. I might be continuing this in a couple of sonnets. I must say I like writing sonnets.
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:iconthedarkenedbride:
TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
enchanting :clap:
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:iconniallcloud:
NiallCloud Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^^
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
my pleasure :frail:
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pari-a Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Not to be a downer... but sonnets have to rhyme, don't they?
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NiallCloud Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
They do rhyme...
It's ABBA ABBA CDE CDE... -.-'
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pari-a Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. It's usually abab cdcd efef gg...
It just threw me off I guess cause use IP.
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:iconniallcloud:
NiallCloud Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I know... It's a variant.
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pari-a Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
*didn't use
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EternalBliss777 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
VERY beautiful. i loved it =)
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NiallCloud Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^^
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